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Untitled OPxSS poem by *Idigoddpairings:iconIdigoddpairings:

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Stand and stare at me
Scream the name freak
And tear it down
All that’s built
All that’s broken

Made just for you
Still never saw a thing
Only blindness eluding the
Vision
Go ahead and cry in shame
I tried playing that innocent game

Hear our metal screech
Beating against our minds
Deluded games
God yes I love you
But how much longer
Can we stand as one?

Division of places
Burn us
Make the oil writhe
And bleed into desire
I am here in the Shadows
Press deep into me
Gasping, loving
So much wonder
So much pleasure
Etched into this Secret

Stand and stare at me
Scream the name freak
And tear it down
All that’s built
All that’s broken
Yet still...still we are one
By heart and not of
Sign
It is that truth
We love
Now and forever...

C. Smith age 19 15/12/08 Monday
©2008-2009 *Idigoddpairings
:iconidigoddpairings:

Author's Comments

Not exactly sure what it's about maybe someone could make clear my own poem to me XD

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*Tessombra Dec 15, 2008, 7:23:38 AM
A loving Decepticon--THAT'D be considered a freak (or a Prime who isn't supposed to be anything but strong and fierce). Although in reality, anything that has a soul (spark) can love, so that's pretty much an illusion. Rip that down, you have a guy in love. And that its forbidden (enemies, different factions) just makes an more titillating and exciting until it turns to love. Then, it becomes difficult, because they are both on different sides. How can loving and being one go on when there's so much about the pair that isn't? (factions, philosophies, ect). But love can unite anything--that's the miracle of it--and the tragedy. And they have little choice but to go on.

How's that?

--
Armed with the personality of Leprecaun gold on a winter's day...
:iconidigoddpairings:
*Idigoddpairings Dec 23, 2008, 11:55:08 AM
That was really good thank you :D
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